Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Collaboration 1, part 8


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Gerald hated Elvis. And yet, for business trips, Elvis was invaluable. Elvis was everything. If Elvis were okay, all was well. Even Presley’s untimely demise in the fall of 1977 played its role. Gerald’s work had been made infinitely easier by the King of Rock & Roll. Still, Gerald hated him, in spite of, or perhaps even because of, his encyclopedic knowledge of the most minute detail of Presley’s life. And every time he had met him after the fall of ’77, even as he had appreciated the information Elvis’s existence gave him, he was still glad the man was supposed to be dead. 
Gerald strode north along 3rd street, approaching Beale. The sights and sounds were familiar to him, but it was the smells that played havoc with him. Cigarette smoke – as often unfiltered as not, barbecued meat with the scent of cayenne pepper and paprika from the famed Memphis dry rib rubs, automobile exhaust saturated with carbon monoxide and lead; all of these catapulted memories into his conscious mind: Johnny Dicks, gunned down outside of the then-Beale Avenue Auditorium; Mabel Douglass and her sister strutting along Union Street, ermine hats and full-length coats in stark contrast to the pristine clouds of their breath against the crisp December evening; and of course, the music…B.B., Ray, Bo…the best of the best of the best.
However, none of these memories or the scents that triggered them could cover up the rank, fetid odor of mountains of garbage piled along every street and on every corner. 
He hitched up his pants again. One of the first things he had done was to find a new set of clothes. With what he was wearing, he had been far too conspicuous. Unfortunately, the transient he had sold his clothes to had been a bit larger than Gerald was now, although if he was still wearing these when – if, he supposed – he made it home, they would probably fit just fine. The .38 he had tucked into the waistband did nothing to help the sagging of his trousers either. 
His cane trailed behind him, remembered only because he was carrying it with him. He hated to lose the damn things, but more often than not, they got lost in the hustle and hurry of his trips. He should have left it at home, but then again, he hadn’t expected to leave the house today.
Speaking of home, he wouldn’t make it back to finish that damn crossword if he didn’t get about the business of business. 
He started with Elvis. If the King were good, he was good. 
“Excuse me, gentlemen,” he called to a trio of young white men waiting for a trolley. “Can you tell me when the Elvis picture is playing at the Orpheum?” 
The men had the tight close-cropped hair of the military. They looked at him askance and puffed up a bit, trying to decide whether or not to harass him. They saw the cane sagging in his fist and it seemed to confuse them enough that they decided to just answer his question. He wondered what he looked like to them. 
“What Elvis picture?” said the shortest of the three. 
“Whichever one they’re showing this week,” he replied. “I can’t really keep track of them, but I try not to miss any of them if I can help it.” 
“Boy, you must be drunk. There haven’t been any Elvis pictures since before the war. How is he supposed to make anymore movies?” 
“What do you mean?” 
The trolley arrived and passengers poured out of its sides. Two of the boys climbed onto a bench in the back, pushing each other a bit and jockeying for position on the inside. Before he climbed on, the final boy looked at him, almost with a look of pity. 
“I don’t know where you’ve been, but Elvis died 10 years ago. Friendly-fire during a training exercise.” 
Shit. Something was up. He grabbed the newspaper. April 1, 1968. It was his birthday. He was 35.

Spring in a flash...or not...

So, it's been a slow couple months on the writing front. After a brief flurry of activity in getting my well-aged short story polished and out for consideration (still waiting to hear back), I did manage to crank out my first real effort at a piece of flash fiction...as a hard sci-fi no less. For a change of pace, I started with a title and figured out a plot to go with it. The idea is decent, but I just couldn't keep it under a thousand words. It stands at around 1200 and really needs to be expanded to give the protagonist a better arc. Ultimately, it'll probably end up somewhere around 2000 words, but much better for it.

Might be a while before I try flash again. Either it's just not that easy to write, or I'm simply not wired that way. Heck, I still find novel length material easier to write than "ordinary" short fiction.

My short term goal is to fix up that non-flash story and then maybe knock out one or two other shorts I have in mind before getting back to the novel side of the to-do list.

In the meantime, I'll throw out another bit of the collaboration story. I think this is where it really starts to expand the scope of weirdness.

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Stepping into Submission

In recent years, most of my writing has been centered around novel-length work, and none of that has been edited sufficiently yet to consider shopping around. Since joining the Slug Tribe writers' group where I've had the pleasure of reading and critiquing many dozens of quality short stories, however, I got the urge to dabble a bit in that format. One of those efforts finally reached my level of satisfaction to deem it worthy of trying to find it a home.

I've found the trickiest bit of getting that first story out there is figuring out where to try to submit it. The various markets all tend to have certain types of stories they buy - not just by genre but tone and style and such. I, unfortunately, haven't done a whole lot of reading in these short story markets, so there was a lot of poking around and consuming to be done. I think I read more short stories in the last month than I had in the past few years.

I finally settled on one for my first effort and the story is officially out. Now I get to sit back and wait for my first rejection letter. This all has a very rite-of-passage feel to it.